How a full stop (or period) can put a full stop to sales …

Today I got two messages about Denny’s book. One, from a friend in Sri Lanka who is one of smartest direct marketers I know read:

“I’ve NEVER ordered a book so fast in my life.

And, bearing in mind that $89 = approx $400 in real cost terms here in Sri Lanka, you had to do a pretty good selling job to make me reach for the plastic.

Just ONE WORD on the book cover made me return to a sales letter and rewrite the whole damn thing.”

Well, that made me feel good. Till I got one from Denny Hatch who said:

“When I clicked on the URL that you have in your Blog, it got the equivalent of TILT on a pinball machine. It did not get to the bookstore.

Here is the URL you used:

http://tinyurl.com/29a5mv5.

Note the period at the end. That screws it up.”

So if any of you had problems, here’s the correct link.

Years ago I read that putting a full stop at the end of headlines reduced readership. Now I’ve learned another lesson!

WRITING WEBINAR: I shall send news about this later today – I’m putting toegther all the ordering details.

Right now I’m going for a health check. Most mornings this consists of breathing on a mirror to see if I’m still alive. But today is the real thing.

About the Author

I've spent the last 15 years working with Drayton.

And, as well as writing copy for our clients, run the agency side of the business.

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